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September 9, 2009
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You’re so far away but so real my dear
I go to sleep to dream and to see you clearly
To quiet my mind and to know that you love me
And in the morning I wake
To the sound of your voice on the phone
But I had just spent the night alone
So for days and days it’s something repeating
Most of the time I’m okay, I swear
Even though my heart’s weeping
Especially during those times that are creeping
Around the corner, they’re misleading
I have to stay strong, it’s unbearably tough
After so many weeks I’ve about had enough
But boy it’s so worth it when we finally touch
I look into your eyes, they’re so green
Who am I kidding, you’re only on the screen
This long distance thing is harder than it seems
I scream, I sigh, and I cry
Though I know you’re mine, all mine
It’s about time you understood these lines
More than words, they’re my thoughts
Bleeding from inside
I can’t hide them no more
Won’t you come walking through my door
And let me know for sure?
Cause I’m completely yours
You’re so far away but so real my dear
Even though it’s so, I still hold you near
Hear me out, wipe my tears away
Please help me get through today

title: You're So Far Away
by: Luana Lani
title: You're So Far Away
by: Luana Lani [link]
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InuFreak4Ever Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
my feels </3
bobmarquis2002 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
What a touching poem ... anyone who has been separated from a loved one can feel the passion ... and the sorrow.

I can't help but think you had someone special in mind when you wrote it.
runswithwind Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
Aloha Luana

I always knew there was more to you than just a beautiful I see!
Amazing, I am going thru that right now, my girl is in, you nailed it!
luanalani Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
Thank you very much for the kind words!
Valedhelven Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
Another well-written piece... my only regret is that you don't write more often :typerhappy: Don't get me wrong - you know how much I love your modeling work, too - lol! But there is another beautiful side to you that most people would never get to see unless they read your poetry... :hug:
luanalani Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011
Thank you!
sometimesnooneknows Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
a very beautiful poem luana
luanalani Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011
Thank you for reading.
sometimesnooneknows Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
ur welcome
RoseByAnyOtherName Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010
i know the feeling. i'm in college and my best guy friend is back at home. i miss him sooo much but we skype a lot. :)
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