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Beyond the high walls
of a barricaded world,
their unfamiliar faces
watched me breathe.

Reaching out again
against my fears within,
but this voice wilted soft
then chose not to speak.

By: Luana Lani
Title: Isolation
By: Luana Lani
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Wolfman13F Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I must have missed this last I looked at your poem. Wonderful piece. Do you publish your stuff?
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luanalani Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
No...I just write for fun :)
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:iconwolfman13f:
Wolfman13F Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Feel free to look at some of mine. Great work, love to read more.
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charlie3136 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
I get it. Nice
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luanalani Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
:)
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Old-Rhino Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Nice poem, is this how it feels in front of the camera?
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:iconluanalani:
luanalani Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
Hmm, I guess it is sometimes.
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charliemc Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Professional General Artist
beautiful words.
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luanalani Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011
Thanks!
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dsmith232 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
This is a really good poem!
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